The Hunt - is this right?

<294hp 455m 263mv wilderness> You close your eyes and hum for an instant. You flicker and blur into the shape of a condor. <294hp 405m 263mv wilderness> fly A pack of wild dogs stops following you. <294hp 405m 263mv wilderness> You flap your wings and soar up above. Far above a Manor [Exits: north east south west down] <294hp 405m 223mv civilized> The hunt arrives with a mighty thunderclap. The hunt yells 'a large condor! Now you die!' The hunt's bite *** DEVASTATES *** you! You sure are BLEEDING! The hunt's bite *** DEVASTATES *** you! You are stunned, but will probably recover. The hunt's bite === OBLITERATES === you! You have been KILLED!! You have died, but the Carrion Fields are not finished with you yet! Your soul is returned to the realms in the form of a ghost. You will return to your corporeal state in a short while. Be careful, for even a ghost should fear some dangers!